My Mafia Man (Editing)

My Mafia Man (Editing)

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Nicky Tate By Nicky-Is-Crazy Completed

Alexis Young is a simple and easy going woman. She is fresh out of college and she just opened a small bakery. She was doing great, she is quick to love and her baked goods always brought her costumers back. One late night, she just locked the bakery and headed home when she heard a noise in the back alley. Worried, that someone needs help, she walked into it, only to witness a murder.
  
  But it was not just a murder, it was a mafia murder. Young new mafia boss, Luciano Moretti, murdered a man that own him money. Alexis couldn't believe her eyes and it was just her luck, that the big bad mafia man saw her and took her with him.

WARNING: This has been written by a much younger self in about a month for Camp Nanowrimo, so it is still full of grammar errors and awkward sentences. I haven't gotten around to actually editing it and i probably never will... so ignore the "reviewed and edited" chapters, because they do not really exist. They all have mistakes, so there is really no need for you to warn me about them.  I hope you enjoy the story anyway.

  • 30000words
  • bakery
  • boss
  • enemy
  • family
  • friends
  • july
  • july2015
  • kidnapping
  • love
  • mafia
  • mafiaboss
  • murder
  • nanowrimo
  • nanowrimo2015
  • project
  • trying-to-keep-it-pg-13
  • violence
Yum!!! That actually sounds good as long as the chocolate is melted then mixed!
LisaGrey15 LisaGrey15 May 03
I've just read another story whose name was moretti 😂😂
Amailya_Nia Amailya_Nia Aug 19
Normally it would be the other way around....with the mother wanting u to desert ur dreams and get a man .....weird
ed2wfu ed2wfu Nov 20, 2015
What a fantastic story! This was great! Vivid scenes. Incredible work.
blackunicorn120 blackunicorn120 Oct 23, 2015
How do you add the cast members thing in the chapters plzz tell me coz even I m writing a story Called a simple love story ?
Mrs-Breezy Mrs-Breezy Sep 25, 2015
i did the nanowrimo thing at school it was fun and was less then 30,000