Short Story Collection

Short Story Collection

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Jordan Elaine By Jordan-Elaine Updated Jan 19

This is a collection of all my short stories. Hope you enjoy them!
  
  Ideas and writing prompts welcome.

JerricaRommel JerricaRommel Oct 02, 2016
Is this by chance, a tribute to grandma? Just curious. I do like the story. My advice for improvement is to make it more emotional, make everyone cry by the very end of the story, because it's a greatly sad topic/story. It's all right to want your readers to cry, it's what good writing is.
JerricaRommel JerricaRommel Oct 02, 2016
Cute story :) A couple grammar issues, mainly around when there is speech, but if you want help with that, just ask me.