A Dark Girl's Stories

A Dark Girl's Stories

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Jordan Elaine By Jordan-Elaine Updated Sep 03

This is a collection of all my short stories. Hope you enjoy them!

  • death
  • dragons
  • family
  • fantasy
  • friends
  • karma
  • life
  • love
  • murder
  • revenge
  • secrets
  • short
  • stories
  • story
  • summer
JerricaRommel JerricaRommel Oct 02, 2016
Is this by chance, a tribute to grandma? Just curious. I do like the story. My advice for improvement is to make it more emotional, make everyone cry by the very end of the story, because it's a greatly sad topic/story. It's all right to want your readers to cry, it's what good writing is.
JerricaRommel JerricaRommel Oct 02, 2016
Cute story :) A couple grammar issues, mainly around when there is speech, but if you want help with that, just ask me.