Animal Jam: Daughter of Greely (Under Editing)

Animal Jam: Daughter of Greely (Under Editing)

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Phantom Fanatic By BanquetFox Completed

Pioneer is an everyday normal wolf. She lives her life with her parents, goes to high school, and hangs out with her best bunny friend. But one day, something goes wrong in school, and everything she knows changes.
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    I love this ~Ostriches1051843
    I'm gonna read this all day its soo good!!!!!! ~ StormSurvivorsfan
    The end was so sad, right in the feels ;^; Great job! lol ~ _DeliriousWaffle_
    Oh gosh... This story makes me tense and the BACON!!!! ~Poppy_Flower
    
    Amazing cover by Fazzie-Is-Fazzie

  • adventure
  • alphas
  • animaljam
  • animals
  • drama
  • phantoms
When you said "Liza felt her fur get hot" you can't be switching points of view, you have to stick to one because it can confuse the reader.
This prologue was over all very nice ^///^ aside from a few mistakes (to me at least) grammar wise, this was over all a great prologue and didn't fail to make me excited! ^///^
You already used 'fashionably late' with Peck, it's getting kinda old :p
I LOVE THIS ALREADY!YOU MADE MY DECISION!I didn't know whether or not I should make an animal jam book,but now I think yes!Thanks.First chapter and I'm inspired!love it.
Black_Bluebell Black_Bluebell May 03, 2017
LOL! Love this book. #AnimalJammer4Life My AJ user is elw06. Buddy me!
Lillymoon25 Lillymoon25 Apr 16
I have read this ever since it came out, I'm in love and I can't stop reading it over and over.