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The_Deep By Deep4141 Completed

Jennifer can't keep her hands off her boyfriend Brett. He doesn't mind it at all. But the guys at school won't let them have their private moments in peace. Brett finds a closet which could be the answer to their problem. But something lurks inside the closet. Could a chance encounter with the 'something' change their lives forever? Read to find out !!!

Deep4141 Deep4141 Mar 27, 2012
                              What a Drama Queen ! If this scared u so much, how are u gonna ever read Role Reversal or Die Another Death?  ;-D
                              Thanks so much for reading n commenting ! I used your cover for the Twist version of this story ! Thanks for that ! ;-D
Deep4141 Deep4141 Mar 27, 2012
                              So sorry for replying so late, but thanks so much for reading and commenting !  ;-)
IamaRyHard IamaRyHard Mar 26, 2012
This is the reason I don't read your story. Your words scare the crap outta me. *sniff* I can't sleep properly. Nice work, though...So real D:
Deep4141 Deep4141 Nov 29, 2011
Thanks to all those who voted for the story in the past month !!! Love ya ! ;-)
Deep4141 Deep4141 Sep 09, 2011
@XxTaylinxX @thetis27 
                              Thanks for the comments, ladies !!! ;-)
thetis27 thetis27 Aug 10, 2011
Great short story hun! I kinda had an inkling that it would happen. Coz really Emily let Brett & Jen go too easily and she (Em)  being a ghost had nothing left to lose.