Disconnected

Disconnected

1 Part Story 530 Reads 18 Votes
Kakarot89 By Kakarot89 Completed

I needed a break from E.V.I.L. and this is a short story I came up with one night. For some reason when I was younger I was afraid of the machine voice that picks up telling you the number was disconnected so I worked with that. This is also my first story ever to be told from female perspective. It's also set in the past (mid 90s). I thought about submitting this to TheCreepyHomeboys but I am happy with the story I have with them. Though they might like this one more. I would like to dedicate this to them, all of them. Thanks to aTouchOfClass for the cover.

AshuraOu AshuraOu Aug 24, 2012 04:01AM
Wow. Scary stuff, monotone voices. Great job with causing fear, it was indeed quote frightening. Although logically the plot makes little sense, it's good for scream-your-head-off horror.
@Kakarot89  I didn't think it was THAT much of horror (((: But, shame on me haha I still play my GameBoy Advance xD
Kakarot89 Kakarot89 Jun 20, 2012 05:09PM
@grammarfreak15 Well thank you. I did list it as horror and was pretty sure I said what it was in the introduction. So, shame on you. I also have my VHS player. I just don't use it as much anymore. But I do play my Super Nintendo almost every day because that thing is BOMB!
Kakarot89 Kakarot89 Mar 06, 2012 06:18AM
@GradyRichards I thought I should have added a Sega Genesis just to make it interesting. I'm glad you enjoyed it. As I said in the description, I've always had the fear that this would happen when I reached a disconnected number. I'm also glad to hear that I can write a teen girl.
AliasLestat AliasLestat Jan 17, 2012 06:41PM
I don't think I will every hear the disconected phone recording the same way ever again, next time I'm hanging up before it can finish talking....
aTouchOfClass aTouchOfClass Aug 05, 2011 05:30PM
By the way, I like the cover but I think the cover should be a little more creepier, But that's just my opinion, Thought I'd share that with you :)