Disconnected

Disconnected

531 Reads 18 Votes 1 Part Story
Kakarot89 By Kakarot89 Completed

I needed a break from E.V.I.L. and this is a short story I came up with one night. For some reason when I was younger I was afraid of the machine voice that picks up telling you the number was disconnected so I worked with that. This is also my first story ever to be told from female perspective. It's also set in the past (mid 90s). I thought about submitting this to TheCreepyHomeboys but I am happy with the story I have with them. Though they might like this one more. I would like to dedicate this to them, all of them. Thanks to aTouchOfClass for the cover.

AshuraOu AshuraOu Aug 24, 2012
Wow. Scary stuff, monotone voices. Great job with causing fear, it was indeed quote frightening. Although logically the plot makes little sense, it's good for scream-your-head-off horror.
Poetical_Friday Poetical_Friday Jun 20, 2012
@Kakarot89  I didn't think it was THAT much of horror (((: But, shame on me haha I still play my GameBoy Advance xD
Kakarot89 Kakarot89 Jun 20, 2012
@grammarfreak15 Well thank you. I did list it as horror and was pretty sure I said what it was in the introduction. So, shame on you. I also have my VHS player. I just don't use it as much anymore. But I do play my Super Nintendo almost every day because that thing is BOMB!
Kakarot89 Kakarot89 Mar 06, 2012
@GradyRichards I thought I should have added a Sega Genesis just to make it interesting. I'm glad you enjoyed it. As I said in the description, I've always had the fear that this would happen when I reached a disconnected number. I'm also glad to hear that I can write a teen girl.
AliasLestat AliasLestat Jan 17, 2012
I don't think I will every hear the disconected phone recording the same way ever again, next time I'm hanging up before it can finish talking....
aTouchOfClass aTouchOfClass Aug 05, 2011
By the way, I like the cover but I think the cover should be a little more creepier, But that's just my opinion, Thought I'd share that with you :)