Until Now

Until Now

8.5K Reads 773 Votes 24 Part Story
Julie By JulieM819 Completed

Maisie had planned to dedicate this summer to going out with friends, staying single, and concentrating not only on her job at Layla's, but also her school work. Going into college was a big step to take, leaving behind family and friends to enter the world as an individual. In only a few months, Maisie wouldn't be the same girl. This summer, she had decided, she'd find herself again. Nothing was going to change that. But when she gets tangled into love, this teenager realizes that plans change, and as she falls head-over-heels for someone unexpected, she begins to wonder if this is everything she's wanted. Up until now, it had been. But now, in the summer heat, she discovers that finding a place in this world means letting everyone else go in order to uncover something beautiful: yourself.

  • boyfriend
  • change
  • cheater
  • cheating
  • complicated
  • drama
  • family
  • finding
  • friends
  • goofy
  • love
  • mother
  • plans
  • playful
  • summer
  • teen
  • triangle
  • work
  • young
  • yourself
DannyFlinn DannyFlinn Mar 05, 2016
Wow, your writing is eloquent and this was such an amazing chapter! Look forward to reading more :)
- - Feb 07, 2016
I'm nearly the opposite. I fail at flirting and am quite socially awkward, plus I don't have many friends who are boys
xxJulietxx xxJulietxx Aug 16, 2015
I feel like there is a lot of tension between her and her mother. this reminds me of a cinderella story
Press_the_Button Press_the_Button Aug 15, 2015
I loved the characters in the first chapter. the MC, Hallie and Violet all have different but interesting personalities and unique voices. They are all pretty relatable
SuchMuch_Lux SuchMuch_Lux Aug 15, 2015
Haha lol I always carry around extra food!! I can't go more than an hour without food or I feel like passing out!! :)
nikkialexis13 nikkialexis13 Jul 20, 2015
Great start to the story! Love the way you set up the dialogue.