My 8, older, over protective brothers!

My 8, older, over protective brothers!

39.9K Reads 917 Votes 12 Part Story
Zoe Emmalyn Smith By TerriRay Updated Nov 29, 2015

Eledee is a 14 year old girl who is anything but normal. She has 8 older, over protective brothers. She loves them and they love her. What happens when Harper is driving and has one of her many panic attacks? She gets rushed to the hospital. How will her brothers cope? Read to find out.

It's better if you write yell instead of scream. Lol so for all the critics
They aren't really memorable and we're meeting them all at the same time so I won't remember these eight people
Nice book but you don't put all the capitals or finish the " sign and I think you should leave a few spaces