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Lost Hope

Lost Hope

915 Reads 18 Votes 4 Part Story
Rebecca Rachel By PrincessBexx Updated May 06, 2011

Neci is a 11 year old girl. Her world is comming to an end. While fleeing from the fires that killed her friends and family, along with everyone else in her little town, she comes across a small shack. The Fire is comming down on her from the sky, and the waters are rising to swallow her up. This house is her last chance. . As she steps through the door, she steps into another world. Everything is this new world is ideal, the most perfect place to live in. But there are no people. 
Neci goes back to her old world to bring in any surviors. But no one is left. 8 years later, Neci is stil searching the earth, looking for someone, anyone, who has suvived. This is how she finds Aden, and two others. 
But Aden is cold, hardened by life of living in the devasted old world for years. How will they ever be able to get over thier differences and continue the human race?

ChristyD ChristyD Nov 04, 2011
It's a fine idea you have here, keep working on it. Finish it first and then get editing or ask some.
winglessangel winglessangel Nov 04, 2010
wow, no kidding, this is really good and really well writen, please carry this on, i will be waiting for the next chapter, pretty please with whipped cream and a cherry on top with sprinkles and chocolate sauce :P
PrincessBexx PrincessBexx Oct 06, 2010
@Fxckyeah haha thanks you make me feel good :p and this is only a rough draft, so (eventually) i will fix the fact that she sounds too old.... I'm gonna go read yours now :)