A new life || js

A new life || js

9.6K Reads 266 Votes 27 Part Story
sara By xmoonlightmadness Completed

Eliza Parker lived a normal life, until her parents died in a car crash. She was forced to live with people she never met before, but it didn't turn out as she expected.

NaniSaysHi NaniSaysHi Nov 06, 2016
CORRECTION 3 kids... Eliza..  Joe and Eliza are getting married which makes her his daughter in-law
PlamediAnne PlamediAnne Mar 21, 2016
I think this could use some punctuation instead of just using all caps. It's really weird to me. I like the plot a lot though.
PlamediAnne PlamediAnne Mar 21, 2016
I think this could use some copy editing. This could use a lot more detail. I didn't feel like it could be much sadder with more detail.