Eliza Parker lived a normal life, until her parents died in a car crash. She was forced to live with people she never met before, but it didn't turn out as she expected.
CORRECTION 3 kids... Eliza.. Joe and Eliza are getting married which makes her his daughter in-law
I think this could use some punctuation instead of just using all caps. It's really weird to me. I like the plot a lot though.
I think this could use some copy editing. This could use a lot more detail. I didn't feel like it could be much sadder with more detail.