The Traitor's Wish

The Traitor's Wish

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Capt. Swan By RachelmRandolph Updated Apr 22

One moment can change your whole story. For Emma Swan that moment was long ago, if things had been different she may be running form the Evil Queen right now, with her mother the bandit, but instead they all lived together in one palace, ruling the Enchanted Forest. Her families history had been almost near perfection and her life was like- well, a fairytale. This however, was not the case for Killian Jones, swashbuckling pirate captain of the Jolly Roger. He had lost his brother to a unworthy king's lie, and he had never loved a living soul again. [SET IN THE ENCHANTED FOREST: no curse] lieutenant  duckling, captain swan

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suxqr_ suxqr_ Dec 23, 2015
When it said that her father didn't know what she was implying I had to stop(this is a good thing. I couldn't stop laughing).
Shattered_Phoenix Shattered_Phoenix Oct 20, 2015
I have a feeling Kade is Killian but I have no idea why he chose Kade for his name. Anyways, loved this chapter!!! Why are you so amazing at writing? It's not fair at all!! This book is so amazing and I've only read two chapters!
Shattered_Phoenix Shattered_Phoenix Oct 20, 2015
This was such an amazing chapter!!! Your writing is amazing and it always has feeling in it. I love your works! I can't wait to read the rest of this. It sounds amazing already!
- - Sep 07, 2015
That was absolutely stunning. You wrote with such passion and vocabulary that your story is so much more enjoyable, which makes it 10 times more enjoyable that most other books. I love your works. Keep it up.
- - Jun 22, 2015
I loved it!!! I'm not mentally or emotionally prepared for this!!
slee-belle slee-belle Jun 21, 2015
Well let me just say this. I get very happy when you update. You are definitely my favorite account and you definitely made me want to write a cs story instead of making just one shots. Thank you so much for that! :)