It all started because Marly Opened the door.
Read the story so you'd know what did start? and what happened to Marly
Put spaces between paragraphs. I would read it in a book but not online, it all seems too long and I can't even bring myself to read it because its making my eyes stop reading after one sentence.
I read one line and when I go to the next line my eyes seemed to be reading the same line instead of the next line xDD You could say that I get confused that I had to use my finger to read each line properly xD