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The Lies We Tell (BEING TAKEN DOWN SOON DUE TO RE-WRITE)

The Lies We Tell (BEING TAKEN DOWN SOON DUE TO RE-WRITE)

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Eliza Giraffe By Eliza_giraffe Updated Jul 04

BEING TAKEN DOWN SOON DUE TO RE-WRITE. YOU CAN READ, BUT MAKE SURE YOU READ THE NOT AT THE BEGINNING!

Taylor has had these strange feeling's towards Carlos' Dad for a long time. When he was younger he figured it was just the need to have a father seeing as his wasn't there for him. That's what his mother told him when a 9 year old Taylor came to her and said he loved Mr Evans. 

Then puberty hit! He has been struggling with 'certain urges' for the older man since then and now he gets the vivid dreams that leave him frustrated every morning. All he wants is for this man to notice him for the now grown up man he is at the age of 18. 

Carlos has been realising the way Taylor looks at his father over the last year. At first it repulsed him and then over time he began to realise that Taylor didn't lust after his father, he loved him. The idea suddenly wasn't so strange, if he was going to have his father with someone he would definitely want him to be with Taylor. 

Now to work out how...

Um in my opinion I  think the plot was quite fine and you did an great job with this story.