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Can't love you

Can't love you

1.5K Reads 142 Votes 13 Part Story
Tima By Tima_88 Updated Nov 18, 2013

When the world is not the place we thought it was anymore and creatures we used to scare the kids with show up in the middle of our ordinary day and let us know that they DO exist ; everything changes.But it's the life of those  two different species that is on the online and if cahnges won't happen soon one of them might disappear... for good. The solution is easy but the actyion is hard as two different kinds who hate each other tries to be one to save the world but would that happen? and if it did would it last? read and enjoy the journey of a dead heart and beating one running to save the world

DeborahhSc DeborahhSc May 16, 2013
omg I must have been in space when I wrote my comment, as I wrote she and heroine, when tristain is a boy lol. sorry. Must have been in the mindset of a girl when writing it and not thinking :)
Tima_88 Tima_88 May 15, 2013
@Marcyline You're not weird, well maybe a bit for not liking vamps :P JK
                              I'm going  to repolish it as said before and I hope if you do have time you'll take a second look once it's done
                              Thank you for the review been super helpful :)
Tima_88 Tima_88 May 15, 2013
@DeborahhSc Thank you so much for the fedback ..super helpul,  do kinda have a lack when it comes to descriptions but will take a second look and have more of it,  
                              Thank you again :)
Tima_88 Tima_88 May 14, 2013
@DeborahhSc Darn your review is awesome ...thank you so much, will take time to edit it and add more descriptions into the scenes 
                              Thank you so much :)
Tima_88 Tima_88 May 13, 2013
@tmcmillan I wanted to keep this world kind of a mystery and just give out facts slowly throughout the story but YOU 'RE RIGHT ! have to give some clues 
                              THANKS for the awesome feedback hope u'll keep the support :))