Accursed Wars of Immortalis
Every so often, demons from the Realm of Chaos invade the realm of the living, claiming many victims with claw, fire, or curse. The Third Outbreak, the first to spread across the entire north-western land, resulted in all-out war for over a decade. Humanity rode to battle against thousands of demons, and the conflict culminated into a single battle at the source of the evil. Many were involved in the conflict, from legendary warriors such as Chaosbane Akarin, to the offspring of farmers such as Flann of Mirth.
Arthen of Richter, historian, collected several journals and conducted interviews with survivors of the Outbreak, to improve our understanding of the demons and the Realm of Chaos.
***Feedback needed! -- Revision complete!***
Entry 1: Fate or Luck
The first part of the tale of Flann, one of the many victims of the Outbreak who was cursed and condemned to the hellish native realm of the demons . There she would remain until their day of salvation.
Entry 2: Mirth Amidst War
Upon her rescue from the Realm of Chaos, Flann joined the fight alongside the Legionnaires of Light, a sacred order of warriors and priests who exist to fight Chaos. She hopes to save as many innocent people as she can from the clutches of the demons, but she must fight for her own life as well as that of her childhood friend and partner Walgen. War rages on and countless lives have been lost. Only time knows whether they fall to the ever-oppressing feeling of doom, or the claws of demons.
***Further entries will be added, but not for some time.
I would like some feedback on my prose. Constructive criticism wanted! Please note any mistakes through private message. A NOTE: In this world, the sun rises to the west, not east as it does on Earth. I did this on purpose because I felt like it. That's it. Enjoy!***