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Assassin (A Prequel in the Valiant Series)

Assassin (A Prequel in the Valiant Series)

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jesusfreak202 By jesusfreak202 Completed

Sold into slavery by his own parents at the age of seven, Aidan has spent his life enduring torture and training. Now, as a fully grown man, he is an Assassin. He kills whoever the king wants dead without question or regret. 

Until another assassin comes for the king's daughter. When Aidan discovers who sent the assassin, and why, it will begin to unravel a web of lies and darkness that is consuming, not only Aidan and his past, but the entire kingdom. 

A prequel to my series called Valiant.

Nice opening! One thing I would recommend is to think about your opening sentence. If you only had one sentence to pull your reader into this story, what would it be? Just a tip I learned from a writing class. :-)
honnaoharney honnaoharney Feb 11, 2016
You have a strong plot based style, so the story moves right along, which I can appreciate!
- - Mar 04, 2016
Wow! Just started reading and probably won't stop until I'm done... Nice work!
mea923 mea923 Mar 02
Wish I would've read this before Shifter!!! But I get the feeling I'll still enjoy this ride.
- - Mar 11, 2016
I like Aiden.. cruel and unremorseful yet humble. Seems like a decent character.
Ryder27 Ryder27 Dec 30, 2015
You are an absolutely amazing writer! I can't understand why more people aren't reading your works.