Trapped

Trapped

1.7K Reads 38 Votes 3 Part Story
Kauser By InconceivableNotions Updated Dec 28, 2010

Melanie has been held captive in her own home by her abusive boyfriend, Jason. She is then left to contemplate his abrupt disappearance and when he returns, a dramatic change in his behaviour leaves Melanie feeling more confused than ever. Will she be able to forgive him and look past his aggressive nature? Or will she finally be able to make the escape that seems virtually impossible?

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InconceivableNotions InconceivableNotions Sep 01, 2011
@YellowSHINee CHANG! thanks so much :D i hope so lol and i hope i get a place in CW :/ but thank you for your comment and reading :) ly xxx
AyumiiYumii AyumiiYumii Sep 01, 2011
Whoooah! This is really good Kaus!!! The description is amazing! You'l do fine in creative writing <3 Chaang xxx
                              Poor Melanie D:
foreverspeak foreverspeak Mar 01, 2011
I am absolutely speechless. You are amazing at writing. I mean the detail you put in is really amazing. You defenetly have talent!!!! =)
CraziiZaii CraziiZaii Mar 01, 2011
Wow this was just wow... I have no words to explain it... unbeliveably AWESOME!! The description and the meaning you put into it is just amazing. On to the next chappie xoxo
InconceivableNotions InconceivableNotions Dec 28, 2010
@XoNobleXo aww thank you nabz!! im not being modest it's the truth :P and ur comments always mke me smile so thanks 4 that :) Luv u buddy...xxx
Noble_093 Noble_093 Dec 28, 2010
Lol, They way you ryt is amazing Kaus and wt ya mean Lit is nt one of ur strengths!!!?? haha stop being modest :P
                              I can still remember wen I first read it :) 
                              Luv you :)