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Betrayed Percy Jackson the 15th olympian

Betrayed Percy Jackson the 15th olympian

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lanorshark By lanorshark Updated Jun 18

#pertimis #betrayed #percyjackson #percy #artemis #betrayal #15tholympian

Wait zeusy gave up the throne uhhhh he's drama queen he will never do this
Can you please seperate the paragraphs its all jumbled up (story is great by the way
Zeus probably wouldn't have given to throne so easily but I like how he is not evil or to stuck up like some other stories
HelloItsRKO HelloItsRKO Jul 18, 2016
THe story is good, but I have a hard time following the speech
batwing1167 batwing1167 Sep 03, 2016
Quick start, but I like how you get straight to the story. My only suggestion would be during editing, check punctuation.
PercyAnnabeth20owl PercyAnnabeth20owl Sep 04, 2016
I like the storyline! The only thing you might want to work on is grammar and punctuation just so it is a little clearer. Good job though!