Betrayed Percy Jackson the 15th olympian #wattys2016

Betrayed Percy Jackson the 15th olympian #wattys2016

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lanorshark By lanorshark Updated 5 days ago

#wattys2016

HelloItsRKO HelloItsRKO Jul 18
THe story is good, but I have a hard time following the speech
batwing1167 batwing1167 Sep 03
Quick start, but I like how you get straight to the story. My only suggestion would be during editing, check punctuation.
I like the storyline! The only thing you might want to work on is grammar and punctuation just so it is a little clearer. Good job though!
Secrxt_luv Secrxt_luv Jan 23
Uuum I'd like the story better if you fixed the spelling mistakes