Betrayed: Percy Jackson, The 15th Olympian

Betrayed: Percy Jackson, The 15th Olympian

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lanorshark By lanorshark Updated Nov 15

Percy is betrayed by all he holds dear. 

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I read a story like this with the same um younger half brother kind of thing. The younger half brothers name is Zack too..
Can you please seperate the paragraphs its all jumbled up (story is great by the way
batwing1167 batwing1167 Sep 03, 2016
Quick start, but I like how you get straight to the story. My only suggestion would be during editing, check punctuation.
PercyAnnabeth20owl PercyAnnabeth20owl Sep 04, 2016
I like the storyline! The only thing you might want to work on is grammar and punctuation just so it is a little clearer. Good job though!