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Betrayed Percy Jackson the 15th olympian

Betrayed Percy Jackson the 15th olympian

41.5K Reads 926 Votes 17 Part Story
lanorshark By lanorshark Updated Feb 28

#pertimis #betrayed #percyjackson #percy #artemis #betrayal #15tholympian

Zeus probably wouldn't have given to throne so easily but I like how he is not evil or to stuck up like some other stories
HelloItsRKO HelloItsRKO Jul 18, 2016
THe story is good, but I have a hard time following the speech
batwing1167 batwing1167 Sep 03, 2016
Quick start, but I like how you get straight to the story. My only suggestion would be during editing, check punctuation.
PercyAnnabeth20owl PercyAnnabeth20owl Sep 04, 2016
I like the storyline! The only thing you might want to work on is grammar and punctuation just so it is a little clearer. Good job though!
Secrxt_luv Secrxt_luv Jan 23, 2016
Uuum I'd like the story better if you fixed the spelling mistakes