Betrayed: Percy Jackson, The 15th Olympian

Betrayed: Percy Jackson, The 15th Olympian

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lanorshark By lanorshark Updated Aug 26

Percy is betrayed by all he holds dear. 
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Can you please seperate the paragraphs its all jumbled up (story is great by the way
batwing1167 batwing1167 Sep 03, 2016
Quick start, but I like how you get straight to the story. My only suggestion would be during editing, check punctuation.
PercyAnnabeth20owl PercyAnnabeth20owl Sep 04, 2016
I like the storyline! The only thing you might want to work on is grammar and punctuation just so it is a little clearer. Good job though!