Plunged into Darkness (blind human/vampire)

Plunged into Darkness (blind human/vampire)

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myspecialworlds By myspecialworlds Completed

ELIZABETH : Six years ago there was a horrible accident. Unfortunately my parents did not survive, but I did. One problem – I lost my sight. But it’s true what they say; lose one sense and all others heighten . . . even more than I realized. 
JESSE:  Over a hundred years ago there was a horrible accident. My village did not survive, but unfortunately my brother and I did. One problem – we were turned to vampires.

SeanaMcmillan SeanaMcmillan Feb 25, 2016 11:33PM
You are doing a wonderful job with your writing. I am just trying to help with this, it's a common mistake I've been seeing lately, but, the word your looking for is "definitely", not defiantly. I am enjoying your story!
Roses are red,
                              Cactuses are prickly,
                              HOLLY SHIZ 
                              THAT ESCALATED QUICKLY
shadowwarwick7 shadowwarwick7 Apr 13, 2016 10:00PM
Chance is like Damon and Jesse is like Stefan from Vampire Diaries.
ed2wfu ed2wfu Nov 21, 2015 09:45AM
Adding this to my list for sure! I loved it! This was great! Incredible work.
Elizabeth sounds epic already, and Chase is totally a player.
raychillgray raychillgray May 16, 2015 11:21PM
Much faster. Better grammar to use after rather than quicker