Plunged into Darkness (blind human/vampire)

Plunged into Darkness (blind human/vampire)

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myspecialworlds By myspecialworlds Completed

ELIZABETH : Six years ago there was a horrible accident. Unfortunately my parents did not survive, but I did. One problem – I lost my sight. But it’s true what they say; lose one sense and all others heighten . . . even more than I realized. 
JESSE:  Over a hundred years ago there was a horrible accident. My village did not survive, but unfortunately my brother and I did. One problem – we were turned to vampires.

You are doing a wonderful job with your writing. I am just trying to help with this, it's a common mistake I've been seeing lately, but, the word your looking for is "definitely", not defiantly. I am enjoying your story!
Roses are red,
                              Cactuses are prickly,
                              HOLLY SHIZ 
                              THAT ESCALATED QUICKLY
Chance is like Damon and Jesse is like Stefan from Vampire Diaries.
ed2wfu ed2wfu Nov 21, 2015
Adding this to my list for sure! I loved it! This was great! Incredible work.
TimeyWimeyIdris TimeyWimeyIdris Jul 27, 2015
Elizabeth sounds epic already, and Chase is totally a player.
raychillgray raychillgray May 16, 2015
Much faster. Better grammar to use after rather than quicker