If I Fell

If I Fell

64.4K Reads 1.9K Votes 59 Part Story
S H E N By MsShen Completed

Mahuhulog ka pa ba? Kung alam mong sa huli Ikaw lang din naman ang masasaktan?

chevil18 chevil18 Oct 22, 2016
Awwww. So while I was scanning stories to read, I accidentally saw this. A nice prologue means a nice story.
PENandSCISSORS PENandSCISSORS Dec 21, 2015
Laglag panga pa more! Haha! Is that crush at first sight or LOVE at first sight? Ayyiieh!
PENandSCISSORS PENandSCISSORS Dec 21, 2015
Hmm. Between Razon and Axel, mas naho-hook ako kay Razon. I like the way his personlity was depicted. Akin siya ha? Hahaha!
PENandSCISSORS PENandSCISSORS Dec 21, 2015
The story holds a common plot. The kind that you see often. Pero personally, I don't really mind dahil maganda siya. The prologue is steamy, catchy, and beautifully written despite some minor technical errors. Prologue pa lang eh nakaka-intriga na ang mga karakter. Keep up!
CallMeBoss CallMeBoss Oct 11, 2015
Greek God lover! Hahaha. Greek Mythology. Based on true story yata ito, e.
lolitaAi lolitaAi Aug 28, 2015
though ang task ko ay mag-vote lang, binasa ko na muna and it hooked me until natapos ko 'tong basahin na part..aba ang galing ah, this is good..not so much in narration (di katulad nung akin haha) but quite nice in description. keep up with this :)