Thanks for not killing me (lesbian love story)

Thanks for not killing me (lesbian love story)

399K Reads 5.5K Votes 28 Part Story
Claudia Maria By Cloudywolfx Updated Feb 20, 2014

Lillian Blood a relatively normal lesbian highschooler that meets a dark haired beauty who's name is Katherine Masters who happens to be a werewolf.

**Fair warning: The first 22 chapters are currently a work in progress for revision but still readable if you aren't too anal about punctuation**

Medzerus Medzerus Sep 23, 2016
Yeah better sentence structure and better grammar would make the thing more bearable to read. But the story is impressive, I must say. I like the idea of a lesbian warewolf. Sweet
YouWereSaying YouWereSaying Nov 04, 2013
@SubtleFrost I totally agree with you... It's a good story the idea and everything... but It's just the way she wrote it.. but good story non the less... just need to work on the writing
SubtleFrost SubtleFrost Mar 17, 2013
This would probably be 20 times better is you wrote it properly. (separating paragraphs, punctuation, etc.) it's really hard to read, the way its written now, but the story's fine.
Cloudywolfx Cloudywolfx Nov 06, 2011
@goldenchild yeah me and punctuation aren't very good friends ;p
PaintedRed PaintedRed Aug 29, 2011
hey, this is pretty good... I like the concept :) Sentence mechanics and separation of paragraphs could use some work. If you need someone to help edit, I'd be happy to help! Just pm me and I'll get back to you. Nice job :)