Sometimes arranged marriages are difficult but mine, is just my arranged marriage. Can you and your husband like each other or just say "I don't" at your wedding, find out in "My Arranged Marriage"
Now I'm so confused........ Can't understand who is Bella,jewel and you!!!!!!!!!?????!!!!!!!???
Here is a tip ur rushing ur book too much and I feel so confuse tbh
Great story though.. but confused.. bella, jewel..? You showed zach around the house... who is you?
Good advice - watch what point of view you are using when writing the story...different point of view makes the reader confused!
I cant understand if this 1st person or 3rd??? Sooo confused!!!!! O_o
Good start but you must not reread the chapter but it is good