My Arranged Marriage

My Arranged Marriage

63.7K Reads 1.1K Votes 11 Part Story
Izabella Ruisenor By Just-Izabella Completed

Sometimes arranged marriages are difficult but mine, is just my arranged marriage. Can you and your husband like each other or just say "I don't" at your wedding, find out in "My Arranged Marriage"

Tahominatoma Tahominatoma Aug 14, 2016
Now I'm so confused........ Can't understand who is Bella,jewel and you!!!!!!!!!?????!!!!!!!???
vanilaqueen vanilaqueen Jan 09
Here is a tip ur rushing ur book too much and I feel so confuse tbh
nurulakmar nurulakmar Feb 16, 2016
Great story though.. but confused.. bella, jewel..? You showed zach around the house... who is you?
mantictothecore15 mantictothecore15 Mar 20, 2016
Good advice - watch what point of view you are using when writing the story...different point of view makes the reader confused!
Nbooksn Nbooksn Feb 01, 2016
I cant understand if this 1st person or 3rd??? Sooo confused!!!!! O_o
SylviaAlaniz SylviaAlaniz Oct 28, 2016
Good start but you must not reread the chapter but it is good