GameStop ↭ Dan Howell

GameStop ↭ Dan Howell

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stennie. By JustToBeQuiet Updated Apr 10

In which a girl who works at GameStop has a crush on a boy that buys a video game every week.

Okay; nice concept. But constructive criticism: you don't have to narrate EVERYTHING. You could've simply said that "I locked up quickly, eager to leave. When I got home I signaled Amy that I was home before showering and changing."
BUT MY NAME IS AMY!!!!! TT~TT looks like I shall go with my second name
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
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Yeah I feel as I'm the only one who prefers outlast... I've never played left for dead...
AmazingEli- AmazingEli- Jun 27
I feel as if the last chapter is going to be called "Game Over" idk
frickenzazz frickenzazz Jul 26
OH MY GOD LANE BOY JUST ENDED AND HOLDING ON TO YOU JUST CAME ON
You know it's gonna be a good story when the first sentence mentions your favorite song