Mine, Bitten

Mine, Bitten

48 Part Story 3M Reads 104K Votes
Emmy By inkzerospace Completed

For years, Lilith “Lily” McDermott was kept in the dark from the McDermott family secret. Now, her estranged father has asked that she join him on an exploit. Despite her father’s peculiar practices and unusual interest in the unknown, she yearns for an adventure outside her dull and ordinary life, and gladly partakes in the excitement.
    
    When Lilith first arrives in the beautiful, untamed wilderness of the Carpathian Mountains, she is alive with feeling and a sense of belonging, but her journey takes a sudden dangerous turn when perilous truths begin to unravel and the dark Carpathian hills reveal a deadly secret of its own.
    
    In the midst of darkness and betrayal, Lilith finds herself at the mercy of a dangerous and unworldly creature, baring fangs and a ravenous thirst that seems to yearn for her blood alone. She is frightened yet drawn by the creature that appears as a man but hunts as a predator. Can she find love in a world filled of darkness and insatiable desires?
    
    Cover done by Neeavila.

roodiesmoke roodiesmoke Feb 19, 2016 07:45PM
I admire your incredible writing , its so abnormally beautiful & inflammatory
R u sure u not a published author? ?? Cause this is amazing! !!!
snowmill snowmill Mar 06, 2016 07:49PM
Eye water 
                                    Tears spill
                                    Words that encourage
                                    Yet make me frill
                                    Beauty held within each word
                                    Calling my soul to its beauty spell
                                    Hopes and dreams came here to roam
                                    The poet finally sees her home
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                                    Sorry I just had to I know it sucks :/ *back to story*
I just looked up some pics of this place.. Forget my plans of moving to Paris im moving here!
blackvodka blackvodka Jan 10, 2016 10:42PM
How do people not understand what half the words mean? I do, and English isn't even my first language.
00crossfire 00crossfire Dec 14, 2015 10:03AM
I will call it snuffles...
                                    Oh and I'm luving the book so far ▲-▲