The Night Everything Fell Apart (EXO Sehun)

The Night Everything Fell Apart (EXO Sehun)

19K Reads 1.8K Votes 24 Part Story
S이Y스R라O By Miss-Critic Updated Oct 14

I lost a part of me when you left . . .

UpToGood UpToGood Sep 19, 2015
I love the intro...
                              I am reading it for the first time and I am loving it soo far
rahnelovespanda rahnelovespanda Sep 17, 2015
Waaaa reading it again while waiting for new updates.. I miss Cece and V already
dreamingsoul dreamingsoul Jul 13, 2015
Love your intro, it keeps the reading wanting to know more about Cece!
- - Jul 07, 2015
Great start! I'm already interested to find out what's going to happen.
                              The fact that your grammar and writing is good is also an extra plus! :) xx
myca71797 myca71797 Jul 03, 2015
Very intriguing. I like the whole mysterious vibe and the fact that it was a short prologue made it even more interesting. Total hook. Only recommendation is to stick to one tense. You sometimes switch from past to present. It'll get confusing so stick to one. Other than that, awesome :)
ChickN_Spicy ChickN_Spicy Jul 01, 2015
Nice! It was just short but enough to get the readers curious. ;)