I lost a part of me when you left . . .
I love the intro...
I am reading it for the first time and I am loving it soo far
Waaaa reading it again while waiting for new updates.. I miss Cece and V already
Love your intro, it keeps the reading wanting to know more about Cece!
Great start! I'm already interested to find out what's going to happen.
The fact that your grammar and writing is good is also an extra plus! :) xx
Very intriguing. I like the whole mysterious vibe and the fact that it was a short prologue made it even more interesting. Total hook. Only recommendation is to stick to one tense. You sometimes switch from past to present. It'll get confusing so stick to one. Other than that, awesome :)
Nice! It was just short but enough to get the readers curious. ;)