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A Single Second

A Single Second

5.7K Reads 186 Votes 31 Part Story
Julie By AgnaEoh2 Updated Dec 02, 2010

Destinee Parker Williams is a young girl entering her first year of high school in Greenville, Tennessee. She has a family, friends, and is at the top of her dance class. But when Destinee finds out a secret her mother has been keeping from her for her whole life, she is whisked away to a new life in New York city with a man she's never met, Daniel. She faces challenges with her new school, her new home, and her new friends.

Loud_Smurfy Loud_Smurfy Jan 17, 2011
Omg i loved how u started the whole story i m intrested already! Onto next chapter!
AgnaEoh2 AgnaEoh2 Sep 28, 2010
@YourJustJealous thank you so much.... umm... I guess I just want feedback right now. if you notice anything (good or bad) let me know.
YourJustJealous YourJustJealous Sep 28, 2010
I like it. I also like how you use metaphors. :) If you ever need any help or ideas, suggestions, etc. write me ! I love helping people out.
TheOrangutan TheOrangutan Sep 14, 2010
You write very well, and I am impressed with your flow of narrative. You wanted to know whether I thought it was any good, well i do. This has promise, keep going and no blips or suggestions on this bit at all. Good work. Voted again, blimey. Gav
AgnaEoh AgnaEoh Sep 10, 2010
okay, so you can't vote anymore... at least i don't see where you can... but that doesn't matter, because I like this lotz!