A short story for a creative writing class I'm taking.
From the perspective of a playing card, three of clubs, this story has a light plot but heavy emotions. It is a simple read, but something I recommend to anyone who has time on their hands.
this is really good! i like how its unlile regular stories, and is the POV of a card. keep it up!
@BluexJeans : thanks so much! :D it's for a creative writing class, so it had to be a short story (hate writing those!), but it was one of the best ones i've written i think. thanks for reading and commenting!(:
@ScottKelly : Great! Just patched it up a bit. Let me know what you think. Definitely not finished, but I think it's improved.
@xoinfinitewriterxo Anytime. Can't wait to read this once it's all patched up. If you ever wanna chat, I'm firstname.lastname@example.org on the 'ol Google Chat.
@wolfsblood : Thank you! And yes, I've realized that now. I'm definitely going to make some changes! Thanks for your imput.(:
good story dont get me wrong but some of it was hard to fallow at frist