Marked

Marked

159 Reads 2 Votes 1 Part Story
Maxee By maxeemum Updated Sep 08, 2010

"At the stroke of midnight, the church bell rings.
They have descended with nothing but broken wings. "


Things become a mystery for a reason.
Sometimes the truth is supposed to remain unknown.

tasiajewel11 tasiajewel11 Sep 15, 2010
this is really good. i agree with her down there.. the first sentence isnt that great. but please keep writing its very mysterious.
                              xD
                              -tasiajewel.
xXHarlequinn xXHarlequinn Sep 13, 2010
I really like this story(:
                              I don't like the first sentence though. Just a suggestion, but I like the way "The whole town of "________" hushed as the howling wind slowed until there was dead silence." sounds.