Perfect Miss Messed Up

Perfect Miss Messed Up

393 Reads 7 Votes 18 Part Story
SashaPig By SashaPig Updated Sep 13, 2013

Sandra Ehrlichmann opens up the daily life of everyone's hatest people in school- the popular mean girls. She never cease to fail in breaking people's lives apart along with her other four girls, Ashley, Terri, Roxana and Yvonne. It started out when Ashley's first time crush broke her heart by being with another girl, determined, they planned to break them apart which involves a lot of scheming and pretending. It is easy when that person is nobody to you, but what happens when he/she suddenly becomes a part of your life? Can you live keeping a secret to them, who by the way, trusts you with all their heart? Or is there another flip which calms you down and keep you at ease?

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convurse convurse Jul 07, 2014
I love the way you write except you might want to add punctuation at the end of the sentences. I'll definitely keep reading this story.
SashaPig SashaPig Feb 17, 2013
@KaraKAa3l Yeah, My friend's currently making one since I don't know how to make it uh, creative. Thanks by the way :) Yeah, I've been thinking about a lot of things about what to do. Thanks :)
SashaPig SashaPig Feb 17, 2013
@ohsnapitsnicolex Thaanks. I really appreciate your comment :) Thank You.
SashaPig SashaPig Feb 17, 2013
@Alex_Whiteshadow Thank you :) Yvonne is a pretty nice name for me too. :) You can name your other characters with it too if you like :)
- - Feb 15, 2013
Not bad....It didn't immediately catch my eye though.
                              
                              It needs a bit of work and maybe a more interesting cover would do.
                              
                              But you could do lots of interesting things with the plot you have
ohsnapitsnicolex ohsnapitsnicolex Feb 15, 2013
Okay, first of all I really love your title! it's very captivating. ANyways I love your ideas and this story seems like it will go far! Voted :)