Ripple Harbour ~ON HOLD~

Ripple Harbour ~ON HOLD~

214 Reads 25 Votes 2 Part Story
Louisa By HannahLou95 Updated Feb 15, 2013

"One day you're a normal human being, and the next you're thrown into a world that you never believed existed."

Imagine that anything is possible, that mythical creatures do exist, that people will one day be able to time travel. 

If you open your mind to these possibilities the world becomes a much more fun place to be. You'll see things that others can't, experience things that closed minded people will be unable to experience. 

Sounds pretty insane, right? And to think, you can discover all of this just by finding a rusty old key.

  • baby
  • earth
  • godess
  • harbour
  • mark
  • moon
  • poem
  • re-upload
  • reuploaded
  • ripple
  • sea
  • special
steffy_t steffy_t Feb 20, 2013
omg, i just got the dedication! Yay, thank you so much and I'm just waiting for this to get so many reads!! :D
bluevegasgirl bluevegasgirl Feb 16, 2013
Excellent start and use of language. Loved the last line especially. Good job!!!
OllinOne OllinOne Feb 16, 2013
Wow, this was really good. Hope you write some more. Its definitely going to my RL :D
jomck97 jomck97 Feb 16, 2013
Plus I love your cover. it is unique and different and eye catching. Well done
Tammee Tammee Feb 16, 2013
That was just beautiful. Your descriptions are so breath-taking and well written, it seemed to really pull me in. The only thing I would say to change is the format, because it kind of all over the place. But overall, great job! :)
sophsuds sophsuds Feb 16, 2013
Some sentences were awkward, but still, I like the beginning. I've always liked it when the stories start when the character is still a baby, and I can feel potential on this one.