When a girl arrives in East End, London the move gives her more drama than expected when she meets a certain boy band.
@lotte_buzz I like it a lot better now! A lot of writers write a flashback without much detail, which in most cases is not a bad thing, but when you need to describe emotions it's best to write more about them. So thumbs up and keep writing!
I changed some of the flashback so it had more information :) @WritePerfectMemories
Hi there, the flashback could use a little more detail and emotion but I like the 'present' part. It's nice and it shows her discomfort. But the flashback part isn't really good, or even sad, which you would expect as is goes about her families death.
Really good so far. She should definatly continue with this story. cant wait for the next update!