The 150th Hunger Games

The 150th Hunger Games

3.1K Reads 87 Votes 19 Part Story
Jasmine Dragonite By Watergal336 Updated Mar 27, 2013

Talia Kilster is Finally 19. She cannot possibly be chosen for The Hunger Games. That's when things go downhill for Talia.

Snape3456 Snape3456 Apr 13, 2016
Meanwhile in the audience of the live show...*rolls eyes and growls* "Enough with this crud.." *stealthily pulls out a bow and arrow and shoots Snow*
cardshark07 cardshark07 Apr 24, 2013
Okay so there were a lot of gramatical errors. Also, I don't quite understand th twist and how it comes into play.
MagmaKepner MagmaKepner Apr 21, 2013
@cardshark07 
                              I thought it was interesting.
                              I thought that it was alluring and made you want more.
                              Of course I can see what you are thinking, but yes.
                              :)
cardshark07 cardshark07 Apr 21, 2013
Okay so first off, the summary is horrible. It's not appealing enough to draw people in. You need to add more into it and make it draw people in so they will read your book.