Letting Go

Letting Go

264 Reads 39 Votes 5 Part Story
megdelene By megdelene Updated Dec 27, 2013

Fain Edwards has moved from London to California. She left behind: friends, a city that she loves, and a tragic past. She doesn't think that she will ever be able to be happy in her new life, until she meets a boy who changes everything. Can she really let go of her past and be happy? Or will the past repeat itself?

  • break
  • california
  • highschool
  • london
  • love
  • modern
  • moving
  • narglebeliever
  • teen
megdelene megdelene Feb 20, 2013
@XHaileeX @Lovealicious thank you so much! i tried to break up the paragraphs in this chapter. if you could look it over and let me know if it's better, that'd be great :)
pandemonium9 pandemonium9 Feb 20, 2013
Really good! I like your writing style! However, I don't like the flow that long paragraphs give
EnchantingDragon EnchantingDragon Feb 20, 2013
Pretty, good! It was definitely well written, the only thing I would ask for is a small bit more of character development (but that's minor anyways :) nice chappy!
devz717 devz717 Feb 20, 2013
Voted! It's a good start and I'm adding it to my reading list. :) I'm curious about Bronte . Heading to the next chapter . :)
Melancholia Melancholia Feb 20, 2013
This is very good and I like the idea. Its very humoristic.-voted
namjoonwhy namjoonwhy Feb 19, 2013
I'm re-reading this and it's charming. I love the voice of Fain and I enjoy reading it with an English accent in my mind. :)