Hometown Glory

Hometown Glory

221 Reads 13 Votes 3 Part Story
BetteDavisEyes By BetteDavisEyes Updated Jul 28, 2014

Anna Deckman is a tomboy and often bullied because of it. Casey Mcfall is the hometown glory whom everyone can't help but love. Somehow, in the mix of things, Casey and Anna fall for each other and have a secret romance but, Casey's world is much too different from Anna's. He soon starts to get too frustrated with everyone's expectations and the idea that it's wrong for him to be with Anna. He is so in love and becomes so frustrated that he might just Kill for it.

  • boyfriend
  • dead
  • death
  • frustrated
  • glory
  • help
  • kill
  • loser
  • love
  • popular
  • school
  • shooting
  • surprise
  • suspense
  • teen
  • unexpected
Dream1234ever Dream1234ever Aug 01, 2013
Really interesting prologue! Instantly pulled me in, I love it :D
BetteDavisEyes BetteDavisEyes Feb 18, 2013
@UjiNoKami Thanks for the tips they are really helpful and I'll be sure to work on that. I was thinking to go between past and present to slow the shooting scenes and to show the background of all the characters. Thanks for the lengthy comment and the honesty!
BetteDavisEyes BetteDavisEyes Feb 18, 2013
@kpdanger2014 Thanks I appreciate it! Yeah, I have some sort of idea bu I don't want to give too much away but lets just say I want to break away from the typical popular boy stereotype and there is a big hint in the summary... Thanks for reading :)
kpdanger2014 kpdanger2014 Feb 18, 2013
Really good so far! Do you know where you want to take it? I really liked it. :)