A BEAUTIFUL MISTAKE

A BEAUTIFUL MISTAKE

906 Reads 74 Votes 1 Part Story
Danix] By DanDan19 Completed

All mistakes are wrong, it makes us regret and feel sad. We tell ourselves 'what I have done?!' it also make us feel depressed, right? Everyone, everyday, we are having mistakes. But what if, one mistake can change you, everything about you? Are you willing to change? (short English story) ENJOY!

crazyhiphopnerd crazyhiphopnerd Mar 09, 2014
this book was an emotional but beautiful book about a girl in need of a friend. when she got 1 she sent a guy that loved her away .she didn't no what she had till it was gone . i really liked ur book even though it was a few pages thanx 4 recommending it 2 me
mystywolf14 mystywolf14 Mar 09, 2014
Awesome story!! I've never read anything like this!! beautiful and very descriptive!!
Pivot_ Pivot_ Nov 16, 2013
It's really interesting. Heart-warming story. I like it. 
                              
                              The only downside is that I got a bit confused when you said that Kent was the donor. So that means he died for her? But when you explained it later in the book it all fell into place. Very good.
1Dbromances23 1Dbromances23 Nov 11, 2013
wow I love how I feel as though im the main character and its just written beautifully, great job! :)
Valkiery Valkiery Nov 11, 2013
I don't read that much short story's because I like the story to keep going but I'm really glad I read this one I have really liked your definitely has my vote!(:
bestarrinatyou bestarrinatyou Nov 03, 2013
Aww that is really cute! I hope you write more please! Oh and by the way voted for!