My Player Next Door

My Player Next Door

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priddypaige15 By priddypaige15 Updated Mar 08, 2013

Paige- The fun, popular girl of the school. Tristan- The player & the coaches son.         Josh- The sweet, short, good, teachers son.       .                                                                  Josh secretly loves Paige.  Paige secretly loves Tristan. Tristan is dating another girl. But Paige starts to get attached to Tristan, as she gets attached Tristan secretly hates paige and is just playing her. Paige falls and falls hard for Tristan, Tristan runs to her a minute to late and Paige is already with a new guy she really likes.                                                           *Read on to find out more*                         *^Will put a new chapter every nighti

- - Jan 01, 2015
Too many periods in my opinion, there is thing called commas, you should use it sometime. I'm not trying to sound mean, but it's too blocky? lol