The Alpha's Mate

The Alpha's Mate

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April Nelson is a 17 year old werewolf. Her father died when she was 7 and nobody will tell her how it happened. She moves into Woodsville and meets future Alpha, Luke Smith. Will he help her find out what happened to her dad? Or are some things better left in the past?

    You need to work on your writing skills. It all sounds rushed, repetitive and amateur. Don't give up, I just can't read this because of literacy level. Wayyyyyyyy too under advanced
    "Gym class" makes me sound like a kid, I'm in 11th grade . SHOOJ.
    April & may I have a feeling that they might be best friends 😂👀
    getoutmycar getoutmycar Jan 21
    Hahahhha april and may
                                  
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    April? May? Now all we need is June. And I bet the dude will be named Augustus, August for short.
    Am I the only one who thinks this guy looks too similar to the main character?