Ren

Ren

670 Reads 33 Votes 3 Part Story
Fizzey By Fizzey Updated Feb 19, 2013

Ren, a lone traveler who works to unite sorcerers to fight against their enemy, the world.
The World has rejected and killed his kind, hunting and slaughtering those born with the gift of magic. armed with unique magic of his own and his freinds, they stand up to and challenge everything the world considers holy and right. And now, everyone and everything stands in their way.
You have to be lost, in order to find the truth

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Fizzey Fizzey May 18, 2013
@MatildaParamoreLeonard @xlhasax awesome critiques thank you. This is really helping me out.
mattiwatti mattiwatti May 17, 2013
I really like the way you've started this (: The main character seems to have a lot of personality, which is good, but I think you could take a little more time to give a personality to some other characters. Your writing style in interesting.
Fizzey Fizzey May 16, 2013
@Poindexter thanks for the critique. you explained your reasoning perfectly. this was very useful actually.
Fizzey Fizzey May 08, 2013
@DJEsvilm08 this was extremely helpful. Very In depth critique, that was awesome. Thanks :)
Fizzey Fizzey May 08, 2013
@ClaireBeatsxx finally someone who speaks my language. Thanks!
Fizzey Fizzey Mar 25, 2013
@Ariastgracile thanks! And I do believe I will continue to write until my heart is content. :)