Run (#Wattys2016)

Run (#Wattys2016)

111K Reads 2.2K Votes 55 Part Story
Alexis By lexilouwho Updated Feb 09, 2015

A dense fog surrounded me, confusing my senses. Suddenly, it cleared and a room solidified in my sight. Confusion swept over me. At this rate, it was becoming my new best friend. My gaze swept around the room, landing on a door that had materialized in one of the walls. I began to move towards it, instincts pushing my confusion out of the way. 
Before I could even take two steps, someone threw a hood over my head. My elbows and feet flailed, trying to plant themselves on my attacker. It was no use. Strong arms wrapped around my torso, containing me enough to drag me somewhere only God knew of.
My attacker threw me onto the ground suddenly, pulling my hood off before I hit the floor. The room I had been in was gone. I looked around, but it was completely empty.
That's when I heard them. The whispers. They were telling me to run. The same warning over and over again, getting louder with each second. I sprang to my feet, the room now swirling around me. There wasn't a door. I was trapped.

  • abuse
  • blood
  • crime
  • death
  • girl
  • hawaii
  • kidnapped
  • mystery
  • pain
  • revenge
  • run
  • scary
  • slave
  • suspense
  • teen
  • thriller
  • torture
  • wattys2016
darkdragon2234 darkdragon2234 Dec 08, 2015
Oh. My. Goodness. SOMEONE FREAKING AGREES WITH ME! I am in Middle School, and people are like oh im dating that guy or whatever and Im just over here like your not dating someone until you can go on dates and drive.
SarahGen SarahGen Feb 18, 2014
Guess what Lexi?? I finally decided to find you on here!!! Love you, and you write great! (But that's not a big suprise) :P
lexilouwho lexilouwho Jul 25, 2013
@Fakedeadgirlfriend Thanks for the compliments! And yes, that B is supposed to be capitalized. It's a bit confusing, but their last name is Born. So, Lekia Born. Thanks again!
Fakedeadgirlfriend Fakedeadgirlfriend Jul 25, 2013
Good story.  I like the dialogue between the characters.  You set up the story well and there is good description.  I felt like I was in the kitchen with the characters.  On the first page you say, "I was the only Born child..."  Did you want that "B" capitalized?
psychotic_porcupine psychotic_porcupine Jun 28, 2013
I love the beginning and will definatly carry on with this story! it definatly catches my attention.
                              i found it on the "recommeded for you" section and liked the cover, but I would definatly recommend adding more tags to get more reads