Legendary Stor Re:

Legendary Stor Re:

1.5K Reads 25 Votes 25 Part Story
Greg Filly Ampadu By GregFillyAmpadu Completed

The war between planet Sarganza and Yartek has finished. With their planet destroyed by the hands of their own legend, the Sargans must call a truce with the Yarteks in order to preserve their race. But there is still an inner war being fought on both sides. The Yarteks have invited the Sargans to live on their planet. In doing so, they force them to conform to an unfair way of living. Things really start to go bad for both sides when an assassin named Sodichi comes into power. Sodichi has radical views, and sets a course to meet his desires. With Sodichi in power, no one is safe from his ensuing plot. There is only one person who can put an end to Sodichi. That person is KT Sarganza. KT is a fourteen year old boy who was born during Sodichi's reign. Within KT lies a storied power. It is this power that KT must harness in order to bring down Sodichi and once in for all bring peace between the two races.

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Eva_lovely Eva_lovely Mar 17, 2013
This is really good, not my kind of story but it's really good so far.
GregFillyAmpadu GregFillyAmpadu Mar 13, 2013
was it the big words that made it confusing or are you lost with the plot? I explain a lot in the other chapters if you get the chance to check them out. Otherwise I definitely appreciate your critiques.
Kuronohikari Kuronohikari Mar 13, 2013
Its a nice story, confusing at some places, though. It almost seems like u deliberately used those big words, some of which don't fit the sentences properly. Try to fix that, other wise, its a pretty good read.
Kuronohikari Kuronohikari Mar 13, 2013
That is an incredible cover..i like it. The names are very manga and anime-ish. Another plus point! The descriptions were good, although the spacing thing u must work on, or was that a glitch? So far, so good. I like it!
ChloeLumb ChloeLumb Mar 08, 2013
i loved there there names x really eye catching. i dont really read this sort of thing, but im glues to it now. i really want to know what there digging for x 
                              you are really good with begining your sentences so it grabs the reads attention x i cannot critisise anything xx keep on writing x
GregFillyAmpadu GregFillyAmpadu Feb 20, 2013
@LaellaKaella Thanks for critique. I'll work it out. Stay tuned for my updates