Enchanted

Enchanted

175 Reads 2 Votes 7 Part Story
HalfBloodNaleyFan By maygirl114 Updated Feb 28, 2013

Alice Harris has been in-love with Kyle Harold's since the 8th grade when she realized how gorgeous, funny and sweet he could be.
Kyle has always thought Alice was the prettiest, sweetest, most amazing girl but he knew that he could not have her. He has a terrible secret, he's a werewolf. But when he kisses her at a party of his, he realizes just how much he really wants her. Jason Smith has always felt like he's been missing something, when he meets Alice and realizes, it was her. A year after her kiss with Kyle, Alice begins questioning her feelings for him, why did he pull away like that? When she actually meets Jason at a school dance she likes him immediately. He's sweet, funny and very attractive. Kyle decides that he needs to do something about his feelings for Alice but Jason seems to be catching her heart already. Suddenly, a pack of rogue vampires comes to their town and Jason and Kyle find themselves in a fix. They both love Alice, but hate each other but there's one thing they have to agree about: This is BAD.
Jason's vampire family make plans to fight the vampires but they know that they can't win. How can seven beat hundreds of vampires? Kyle decides that it's time to call in his pack. Jason and Kyle make an agreement but what they don't count on is Alice. She decides that she must be a part of this fight. But when the fight gets messy, all Jason can think to do to save the girl he loves is sacrifice himself. He'd do anything for love, now that he's found it. Wouldn't you? Even if it means sacrificing your own life just to save the person you love the most?

  • alice
  • jason
  • kyle
  • love
  • triangle
  • vampires
  • werewolves
xoxogirloxox1 xoxogirloxox1 Feb 16, 2013
Don't reveal what happens in the book all in one paragraph. You want to leave people wanting more. Advice, don't follow the path of Stephenie Meyer. The vampire and werewolf thing is way over done.