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Sanctuary

Sanctuary

23.3K Reads 356 Votes 18 Part Story
Blush18 By Blush18 Completed

It's a world of hatred, with deaths, cold bodies and monsters. There's only one person Emma trusts and that's her. After being the victim of her stepfathers abuse ,after watching her mom being tortured she set out to a journey to find what seemed like impossible. She will find a home even if it took a life time.

supernaturalmom supernaturalmom Jan 29, 2011
She should tell the police or that guy is going to blame her mothers death on her.
                              peace out
                              S.N.Mom
Silver-Katsiys Silver-Katsiys Sep 10, 2010
I really like how you put the quote at the begining and I thought the 'why does someone need an address to live?' (sorry can't remember the entire sentance!) part was really deep.    :) x
Blush18 Blush18 Sep 09, 2010
@purplem2.  No prob I'll be uploading soon I need to get into character before I write lol 
Blush18 Blush18 Sep 09, 2010
@Silver-Katsiys.  Noo it's okay I was actually reading it and wondering what I could do to fix it thank you for being honest I can always improve my writing :)
Silver-Katsiys Silver-Katsiys Sep 09, 2010
I really like it. I think at the very begining you used the word pain quite a few times in sentences straight after each other, its nothing major but if you used some synonyms then it would be even better! Sorry you asked for comments on improving :) *vote* x
Blush18 Blush18 Sep 08, 2010
@xxtokyoxxx :D thank you 
                              @mercy123454321 shhh lol ;D
                              @KittyKittyMeowMeow I'll be uploading soon since I have two days off from college ;D