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My Broken Luna (#Wattys2016)

My Broken Luna (#Wattys2016)

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Priscilla By awesomepriscilla Updated Mar 04

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"Stop. Stop, please." I sob as the whip comes down on my back once more.

"Shut up yo-" my tormentor's words are cut off by a ferocious growl. I sense another masculine figure in the dark room, but can't make out a word he's shouting. The burning and searing pain that I'm experiencing is just too much.

A sickening snap is heard and something drops onto the cold, stone flooring. The chains around my wrists and ankles are broken along with the tight metal collar around my neck. "Mate." my rescuer growls, gently cradling me in his arms.


Charlotte Beck has been tortured and abused by the Red Stone pack ever since she turned eight. She doesn't know why they hate her or how she ended up a lower rank than the Omegas; no one even bothered to label her as a slave.

She has never known the true meaning of love or how it felt like, all Charlotte knows is that her pack surely doesn't feel that way about her. Finding a mate was a dream that was thrown out the window long ago; all of the verbal abuse led her to believe that she didn't deserve one.

It's not until she attempts to escape again that she realizes that she has a chance of living a better life, one where abuse isn't an everyday thing. Xander Reynolds, Alpha of the Lunar Shadow pack, finds her when she's taken to his cells as a trespassing prisoner. Known as the strongest Alpha in the continent, he does everything he can to protect his mate. The only problem is that she's too emotionally scarred to allow him to. 

His dark and violent reputation is the only thing that Charlotte knows about him. The memories of their childhood together beaten out of her mind. Traumatized and high on fear, she struggles to let down her walls. Her real home is with a man who she cannot remember and a brother who she wishes she remembered.

Can Xander get his mate to love him? Or will Charlotte let her past keep them apart?

Abbythejustinfan Abbythejustinfan 3 days ago
The sad thing some Women has to actually   go through this (and men) 😭the world is disgusting
TheFNAFWriter TheFNAFWriter 6 days ago
I would have resorted to self-cannibalism and eaten my toes off.
You do know that a book can be made that is very similar and be claimed as copyrighted as well as long as they included you, your book, and say that it is for critique or parody and in which is under fair use. But they must state that it's a parody/AU to the original .
TheFNAFWriter TheFNAFWriter 6 days ago
I think your face is too ugly for a mirror even.. so why tell her to clean?
crazypant crazypant Mar 15
This is my weakspot
                              I m glad she dint freaked out
                              Or i wud have kicked his ass
crazypant crazypant Mar 15
That hurts
                              Being brought up in secured and loving environment,
                              Whenever i imagine my life tormented, i end up attempting either suicide or killing the motherfuckas