The Dark Room (#Anti-Watty2016)

The Dark Room (#Anti-Watty2016)

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Mythology Queen By butterballporkbun Updated Jan 27

"Once you enter there's no going back..."

A child's innocence can be a wonderful thing. It can help them see and believe in things adults can't such as imaginary friends and mystical other worlds. But a child's innocence and trust, can also lead to great tragedy.

Edited by @Dark_Crystal_Angel

No need for the comma between "find" and "Coco", I think there should be a question mark at the end of his statements. There should be a comma between "said" and "grabbing" and another one between "frowned" and "but".
snowy123456phoenix snowy123456phoenix May 26, 2016
This was a  very interesting chapter I can't wait for the next I had a shock when the nan hurt the girl upsetting part but well written
snowy123456phoenix snowy123456phoenix May 26, 2016
This was a  very interesting chapter I can't wait for the next I had a shock when the nan hurt the girl upsetting part but well written
"Relax" should be in past tense. Also, the ... Do not really work where they are
UOcan95 UOcan95 Jul 21, 2016
Nice chapter this is gud i hope the next chapter is also gud <3
There would be a comma between "girl" and "have" and also another one between "little" and fluffy"