The Dark Room

The Dark Room

11.8K Reads 877 Votes 20 Part Story
Mythology Queen By butterballporkbun Completed

"Once you enter there's no going back..."

A child's innocence can be a wonderful thing. It can help them see and believe in things adults can't such as imaginary friends and mystical other worlds. But a child's innocence and trust, can also lead to great tragedy.

Edited by @Dark_Crystal_Angel

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Dark_Crystal_Angel Dark_Crystal_Angel Feb 14, 2017
No need for the comma between "find" and "Coco", I think there should be a question mark at the end of his statements. There should be a comma between "said" and "grabbing" and another one between "frowned" and "but".
snowy123456phoenix snowy123456phoenix May 26, 2016
This was a  very interesting chapter I can't wait for the next I had a shock when the nan hurt the girl upsetting part but well written
snowy123456phoenix snowy123456phoenix May 26, 2016
This was a  very interesting chapter I can't wait for the next I had a shock when the nan hurt the girl upsetting part but well written
Dark_Crystal_Angel Dark_Crystal_Angel Feb 14, 2017
"Relax" should be in past tense. Also, the ... Do not really work where they are
UOcan95 UOcan95 Jul 21, 2016
Nice chapter this is gud i hope the next chapter is also gud <3
Dark_Crystal_Angel Dark_Crystal_Angel Feb 14, 2017
There would be a comma between "girl" and "have" and also another one between "little" and fluffy"