Missed me?

Missed me?

18.9K Reads 738 Votes 28 Part Story
DeeDee Colmenero By WildRose1996 Completed

I brought my knees up to my face as my legs tremble in fear. My face was damp with tears, that run down on the dried up blood from my cracked lips. My body was sore from the bruises left behind from their violent hand. 

I once tend to love the light and now all I want to do is hide in the abyss of the dark. But no matter what they will find me and get me. 

I hear their footsteps approach and I hold my breath as long as I can so they won't hear me. The sound of the footsteps disappeared....but they didn't fade away. My heart beat drops as it completely stop for one whole second. The silence was too quiet, very quiet.

For a place where the sun never rise, I never thought the darkness can be overwhelmed....yet only by their shadow. I can sense them outside the closet door waiting for me to realize that they found me. They always were the best seeker, they always win.....

Minutes went by.

Why weren't they getting me?... The wait was driving me out of my mind. These mind games had me p...

Wttbp_ Wttbp_ Aug 03, 2016
YOUR STORY IS AMAZING OMGGGGG AND DON'T WORRY ABOUT THE READING, IT'S AMAZING I'M INLIVE WITH THIS STORY HOLY F
Ashcos_02 Ashcos_02 Oct 16, 2015
I like but I'm confuzzeld. Who's POV is this being told from?
Ashcos_02 Ashcos_02 Oct 16, 2015
OH MY GOSH I LOVE BLEACH AND HAVE NEVER SEEN A FAN FIC FOR IT BEFORE TODAY!!! THANK U FOR USING YOUR IMAGINATION AND WRITING THIS BEAUTIFULNESS!!! :)
benihime214 benihime214 Jun 14, 2015
I liked the fact that you read your story.  yeah and don't worry about the stuttering, believe me I do that too. everybody fumbles sometime. but you did really well. I like the detail of the nightmare,  you made it very realistic.