Jacob and bella

Jacob and bella

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natalie_prior By natalie_prior Completed

Bella prov.
Today is the day I go on a plane and spend the last year of school in a small town in Washington named forks. My dad asked if I'd like to come and see him and I have missed him a lot. There is my dad's friend Billy Black and his son Jacob I have not seen them in 9 years. My mom drops me of at the airport and I am on my way to forks under constant cloud.

*After flight*

I see my dad standing by his police car, he is sheriff. Once I get to his car I give him a hug and he hugs me back. On our way home he says "you remember Billy and jacob right" I answer "of course" jacob and I used to hang out all the time during the summer when I still came. He says "well I was wondering if you would like to go over there for dinner tonight.

Sorry the chapter is short. How do you like so far. It's my first time writing so hope you like it.

Fourtri1234 Fourtri1234 Nov 17
Slow it down a bit and use more details and descriptions to make it more interesting, it will liven if up a bit
Fourtri1234 Fourtri1234 Nov 17
Slow it down a bit and use more details and descriptions to make it more interesting, it will liven if up a bit
AneeB28 AneeB28 Jun 24
He is the Chief of Police. Not Sheriff! Forks isn't a County it's a small Town. 😅
Heydudeitskailey Heydudeitskailey Aug 30, 2015
ik this is only the first chap. but id like to say it now... KEEP UDATEING LUV IT