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Locked In Paradise

Locked In Paradise

310 Reads 4 Votes 4 Part Story
SaraLuvsMahone By SaraLuvsMahone Updated Sep 07, 2010

Chapters 1-4

SaraLuvsMahone SaraLuvsMahone Apr 27, 2011
thanks for the advice i will remember that it in the future.
kaykillerby kaykillerby Feb 24, 2011
it looks like a good story so far, but just a little advice: you should choose a different point of view to write how the character interact eg: first person, second person and third person style. just some friendly help i dont write but i read so much.