It All Started In Detention (Lesbian)

It All Started In Detention (Lesbian)

123K Reads 3.9K Votes 54 Part Story
JazzyS1232 By JazzyS1232 Completed

Two girls get into a fist fight. They end up spending hours in detention that leads to a unexpected romance.


Warning: Mature audience advised due to sexual content, violence, and strong language throughout the story.

fabuluos18 fabuluos18 May 12, 2016
What the, seriously, that's it, whoa dude that was a very fast move but damn
ImThatOneFriend ImThatOneFriend Mar 03, 2016
Great start, I'm already hooked. However...
                              Do you understand the punctuation known as "commas"? :')
                              I can edit that if you want-
ImThatOneFriend ImThatOneFriend Mar 03, 2016
Good start on the romance, but where's the relationship building? Maybe try being more descriptive, and slow things down.
Blake_is_Awesome Blake_is_Awesome Feb 21, 2016
This, I have to admit, went a little too rush. It's a very good start to a romance, however. Have you thought about expanding this chapter a little?
EmaniRobinson EmaniRobinson Jul 21, 2016
Who shares that much when first meeting someone,especially someone they just fought
fabuluos18 fabuluos18 May 12, 2016
Nice one, i really love reading this kinds of stories that greatly turns me on