Girl Who Escaped {Harry Potter: The Goblet of Fire} [BEING EDITED]

Girl Who Escaped {Harry Potter: The Goblet of Fire} [BEING EDITED]

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Elizabeth ➳ By eIysian Updated Oct 09, 2011

[BOOK ONE - COMPLETED]
UNDER EXTREME REVISION, READ AT YOUR OWN RISK: Chapters 19-21 have yet to be edited.

Acacia (Ash) Ivory doesn't know who she is, nor where she came from. After being hidden for two years, she runs away from her adoptive home, she is discovered by none other than Albus Dumbledore. He takes her to hogwarts two months early and teaches her all she needs to know to be caught up with her age group. From being told her boyfriend will die, to the Triwaizard Tournament, Acacia is sucked into the not-so-normal consequences of being Harry Potter's friend. Throughout the year her divination teacher gives her outrageous predictions to her apparent not-so-bright future. After their first adventure, Ash returns to Hogwarts with Harry, Hermione, and Ron to continue to help them in all of their conquests. When the end nears, and Ash puts her life on the line, will her love and jealousy consume her, ultimately turning her to the dark side?

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     When she looked at me, darkness swept into her eyes, almost so much so that for a moment I nearly believed in her credibility as a seer. "You, my darling girl… you have known deep pain and great loss in your life… and alas, it is far from over… you have been touched by The Grim… there are things about yourself that even you do not yet know... loyalties will be tested, bonds will be broken, preconceived ties shattered…you carry a darkness that exposes light in even the blackest of creatures, a darkness so deep that even demons will shudder from the dark shade you bear within your soul."

Can I be editor please? I suggest putting 'people' after 'gifted'. 😓 ( :
Not everything is as it appears? Right now it sounds like everything is something magical and isn't what it looks like.
How does she know she's 'done magic'? Most other people attribute it to something else.
Heh at first I thought he meant Dumbledore and it was like "yes he is a very young wizard (note sarcasm)"
You mean you have to learn ONE year of Care of magical creatures and divination
only the person wearing the hat can her what it says. Sorry I had to say.