Girl Who Escaped {Harry Potter: The Goblet of Fire} [BEING EDITED]

Girl Who Escaped {Harry Potter: The Goblet of Fire} [BEING EDITED]

21 Part Story 232K Reads 5.5K Votes
Elizabeth ➳ By eIysian Updated Oct 09, 2011

[BOOK ONE - COMPLETED]
    UNDER EXTREME REVISION, READ AT YOUR OWN RISK: Chapters 19-21 have yet to be edited.
    
    Acacia (Ash) Ivory doesn't know who she is, nor where she came from. After being hidden for two years, she runs away from her adoptive home, she is discovered by none other than Albus Dumbledore. He takes her to hogwarts two months early and teaches her all she needs to know to be caught up with her age group. From being told her boyfriend will die, to the Triwaizard Tournament, Acacia is sucked into the not-so-normal consequences of being Harry Potter's friend. Throughout the year her divination teacher gives her outrageous predictions to her apparent not-so-bright future. After their first adventure, Ash returns to Hogwarts with Harry, Hermione, and Ron to continue to help them in all of their conquests. When the end nears, and Ash puts her life on the line, will her love and jealousy consume her, ultimately turning her to the dark side?
    
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         When she looked at me, darkness swept into her eyes, almost so much so that for a moment I nearly believed in her credibility as a seer. "You, my darling girl… you have known deep pain and great loss in your life… and alas, it is far from over… you have been touched by The Grim… there are things about yourself that even you do not yet know... loyalties will be tested, bonds will be broken, preconceived ties shattered…you carry a darkness that exposes light in even the blackest of creatures, a darkness so deep that even demons will shudder from the dark shade you bear within your soul."

Viiv-x Viiv-x Jan 24, 2016 09:34PM
Now I'm just thinking about Pokemon
                                    Like 'I prefer Ash. Screw Harry'
ByuByuHi ByuByuHi Nov 14, 2015 05:55PM
I'm back for a second time whilst I wait for a new GWS chapter
voidherondale voidherondale Nov 14, 2015 03:40AM
Honestly I would go because it's an adventure. I'd ask my parents, though, because I'm not that adventurous.
sithtacular sithtacular Nov 12, 2015 03:52PM
I'd pick that owl, too. I love the colour black, and blue just goes really well as a combination with black. Beautiful.
sithtacular sithtacular Nov 12, 2015 03:39PM
That* (: I didn't know whether to point it out, cause I'm honestly not one of those readers to point grammatical mistakes cause it's really annoying to see readers like that, especially when the book is under editing but you asked earlier in this chapter to point out any, politely of course. (:
ElyQis ElyQis Nov 01, 2015 03:37PM
Someone came to tap Ash on the shoulder. "Umm, I'm not sure how to say this but your Majesty just flew out the window after a dragon."