All alone

All alone

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julie8172000 By julie8172000 Updated Jun 07, 2013

All little 5 year old Emma wanted was someone she could trust. Emma is still little but her past holds a lot . Emma was abused by her own dad until she was 4 the neighbor heard screaming
 and called the cops. The cops came and arrested her dad the last thing he said to her was if I find you I will kill you! Emma was taken to a miss.sunny orphanage now Emma is afraid to trust anyone. shes gets picked on and no one does anything about it. then one day out of the blue the famous British boy band one direction adopts her will Emma learn to trust these boys

When they are talking put quotation marks like this,
                              
                              EXAPLE: " i don't want to," Emma said.
I don't mean to hate but the lack of  punctuation is killing me.😕😯😐
liloloves1D liloloves1D Feb 14
Hay I like how you go straight in on it but can you plz put "Emma" some one yelled so you know it's not just them thinking or at least have some sort if signal Thxs
I'm sort of getting confused but it's a really good book☺️
I feel so bad for her she got whipped I know it's now real but still it's really sad I'm gonna cry
demtra demtra Aug 28, 2015
I HATE BULLYS BUT THE BULLY HAS A HARD LIFE ARE HAVE BEEN ABUSED